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Tuesday, 28 January 2014

Immortal Space Chapter Two; Some Explanations

Trent noticed that Jeff had stopped, and so he stopped himself.

“B-b-but-” Jeff stammered. He had been taken completely by surprise by what Trent had said. He realised that Trent had been quite right once he heard it. There was no other way that Trent could have survived all of that and come out in one piece. It was still taking time for his mind to process it all. Near impossible things always did. Especially the stuff that was supposed to be impossible.

“Not this again”, Trent interrupted, “spit it out kid”.

“But everyone dies.” Jeff said, “Don't they?” he added after a few seconds silence.
Trent shrugged and walked on.

“Guess not everyone does. You saw how I was, you know nothing could survive that, believe what you want to believe.” Jeff caught up with him and stood in front of him to stop him.

“No way, no way can you not die. There's no such thing as someone that can't die.” Jeff said. He was still a little adamant in his beliefs despite the evidence that was in front of him.

“Yes there is” Trent said before pushing past him. “I'm living proof. I probably always will be too”. Jeff caught up with him again.

“Prove it”, Jeff said. He pulled out the scalpel he had earlier, having kept it in his pocket.
Trent stopped, took the scalpel from Jeff's hand, and plunged it into his chest where his heart was. After a few seconds of not dying despite having a scalpel in his chest, Trent pulled it out, and gave the blood covered instrument back to Jeff. Jeff stood, once again, dumbstruck. He was able to snap out of his thoughts and once again catch up to Trent, who had continued walking again.

“So, you really can't die?” Jeff asked.

Trent sighed and said “Yes, I really can't die. You know that scalpel isn't fake, and you saw how far I put it in.”

“What about if someone cut a piece of you off?” Jeff asked, curiosity taking over.

“There was one time I lost a finger actually. I went to bed and when I woke up, it was back.” Trent teased sarcastically.

“Seriously?” Jeff asked with a serious expression on his face. Trent once again took the scalpel, and this time cut off the tip of the little finger off of his right hand. After a brief moment of screaming in pain and an extended moment of cursing he handed the scalpel back and put the finger in his pocket.

“I suppose we'll find out won't we?” He said, winking at Jeff.

“Wait, you have no idea what will happen? Why did you do it?” Jeff asked. He was surprised Trent would do something like that without knowing what would happen. Trent held up his hand and looked at where part of his finger had just been.

“Well, you can always learn something new, even at my age.” Trent said, examining his finger.

“Just how old are you anyway?” Jeff asked. This time Trent was the one to stop. He thought about it before answering. He'd never really thought about his age. Time just passed for him without him taking the effort of noting just when it was. He would also spend a large amount of time in space. There was technology to keep track of the time and date, he just never used it.

“I actually don't really know,” was Trent’s eventual reply. “When you live as long as I have, the days just meld together you know? You lose track of these things. I'm not even sure what year it is.” Jeff, however, didn't know what it was like to be so old that the passage of time meant nothing. He chose not to point that out. What he did point out though is that they were coming up on the Janitor's closet, and with that, the lost and found box. With that, hopefully, some clothes for Trent. He also knew what year it was.

“By the way,” Jeff said to Trent as he looked through the box to find some clothes, “it's 2520, that's what year it is.”


“Really?” Replied Trent, picking out a pair of trousers, a black shirt, and a pair of boots. I guess that makes me about five hundred and twenty two years old. Give or take. These clothes will do for now too thanks.” He pushed Jeff out of the closet and shut the door before getting changed. Leaving Jeff, once again, dumbstruck.
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Sorry this is kinda later than I usually post this stuff.

Tuesday, 21 January 2014

Immortal Space Chapter One; Introductions

The autopsy Doctor Osborne performed proved what he already thought to be true; the man called Trent had died when he suffered a large amount of trauma to his head. In Doctor Osborne’s opinion he was lucky to have died quickly and before his body ended up the way it did. He put everything back where it belonged, and stitched the body back together and placed it in one of the freezer compartments the bodies were stored in. He didn't know what kind of funeral the man would have as he wasn't able to find any next of kin for him. Normally when a John Doe with no next of kin came in to the morgue the body would be used for organ donation if there was no last will and testament on record but Trent’s organs were in such bad condition they would be no use to anyone. If no one could find a use for the body then he would be given a quiet cremation after a few more days of trying to find anyone who knew him and who could take the body themselves.

After Doctor Osborne finished the rest of his working day he headed home to his family to wind down and prepare himself for yet another day of being a doctor. He counted himself lucky to have been able to find a wife and have kids with her when he had such a demanding job, but she was understanding. Of course love happened to play an important part in keeping them together.

Jeff was the in charge of guarding the morgue that night. He had never really understand why the dead people needed watching but they had never bothered him none so he liked his job just fine. He liked the peace and quiet that came with it. All he had to do was sit in a chair and keep an eye on people that couldn't move anyway. It was a pretty cushy job to have in his opinion.

He was snapped out of his musings when he heard someone knocking on a door. He jumped out of his seat in fright, thinking it was one of the bodies. Rationality took over quickly and he walked to the morgue door to see who was there. He opened the door and saw that no one was at the door. He was getting a little nervous and while he was checking the corridors to see if he could see who knocked, he heard the sound of knocking again. This time it was coming from behind him. There was no denying to himself this time that it came from one of the freezers. He shut the door to the morgue and sat back down on his chair. He began rocking backwards and forwards in fright. He couldn't believe this was happening and didn't want to believe it was happening. In his time doing the job this had never happened before, and he didn't want it to start happening now. He jumped as he heard the knock again and this time it sounded more impatient.

“W-wh-who's there?” He asked, his voice quivering with fear. He didn't get an answer, just a louder knock in response. He thought he was an idiot to respond and let whatever was in there know he was around. He cursed himself for not just running and finding some help. No one would have believed him anyway if he started talking about how something was alive in the morgue. At the very least they would have teased him and made jokes. The knock sounded again, and Jeff was able to work out which freezer it was coming from. He finally got up and went to the freezer in question. He looked at the tag and saw the name “Trent Saxon”. He remembered that there was someone brought in today with that name but he'd already been autopsied. He'd been taken to pieces and then put back together again. If they had accidentally put a live person in the freezer then someone would have noticed. If they didn't notice the person would be long dead by the time the autopsy was over. Jeff had enough sense to realise if something was in that freezer, it probably wasn’t going to be alive.

The sound of yet more knocking snapped him out of his thoughts and back to reality. He grabbed the sharpest thing he could find, in this case a scalpel, and slowly opened the freezer door. He didn't think he could do much with the scalpel, but he reasoned to himself a sharp object is still a sharp object. When the door was open all the way he hesitantly began unzipping the body bag. The body inside it was totally still and was still blue from the freezer. He looked inside the freezer to see if something had somehow got inside but couldn't spot anything. While he was looking in the freezer he felt something grab him from behind. Whoever it was placed one arm around his neck and the other hand around his wrist of the hand that was holding the scalpel.

“Where am I?” Jeff heard someone say. The voice was low and husky with a touch of a Southern accent. To Jeff it sounded male.

“I-i-i-in the hospital.” came Jeff's nervous reply.

“Which hospital?” The man squeezed harder on Jeff's throat and wrist.

“I-it-it-it's Northwest Community Hospital.” Jeff answered. “Um...sir”, he added, for good measure, in case his unknown assailant would appreciate good manners. Jeff felt the man let go and then pat him on the back.

“Ah Northwest Community? Not my first visit here, but the first time I've met you. So what's your name kid?” Jeff turned round to look at the man and saw that he was covered in stitches and scars. He was also naked and still slightly blue from the freezer. Jeff kept his eyes on the man’s impressive upper body. He was lean but very well built with shoulder length brown hair and blue eyes.

“J-J-Jeff. My name is Jeff. Yours?” He asked, though he expected he knew the answer.

“Trent's the name, Trent Saxon. How do you do?” he replied, holding out his hand for Jeff to shake. Jeff was totally flabbergasted but he reacted naturally and held out his hand. Trent shook it with a smile but adopted a more neutral expression when he saw the look on Jeff’s face. He was very pale and looking Trent up and down with his brown eyes which Trent could see through his scraggled black hair. Everything about him screamed “scared teenager”. He looked like he had been trying to grow a beard too as his face was unshaven, suggesting he was in his late teens.

“What's the matter kid? You look like you've seen a ghost” Trent asked him.

“I think I might be” Jeff said as he snapped back to reality. “Aren't you supposed to be dead?” Jeff asked nervously. Did the dead even get offended?

“Wouldn't be the first time, probably won't be the last,” Trent said, flashing Jeff a smile. “Though I have to say that you guys are getting pretty rough. I'm lucky I was able to pull myself together.” He had a small laugh at his own joke. “Well actually I guess I don't need luck, I'm good.” He added after a few moments of thought. “Say, you got any clothes?” Trent asked, taking notice of his nudity and looking down at his uncovered body. Jeff stood in silence for a few seconds before finally answering.

“Well the ones we found you in were pretty damaged, all but that hat.” He said. He pointed to a Stetson hat that had been left on the floor and Trent picked it up and dusted it off before putting it on.

“Well I'm glad my hat survived at least.” Trent said. “What about my ship, where you keepin' that?” He asked.

“I'm sorry sir but your ship was too badly damaged and we've had it scrapped. Anything important we found was placed in a box and put into storage.” Jeff replied.

“Can you go get it for me?” Trent responded after his mind had processed what Jeff had told him. “Or at least tell me where it is, and give me a gown to put on or something. It's cold in here.” He said, hugging himself to show his point. Jeff was glad for any reason to look away and opened a locker. He pulled out a surgeon's gown and handed it to Trent and then he pulled out a box as he waited for Trent to put the gown on. Jeff handed Trent the box when he was done putting on the gown who took it gladly, happy anything had survived and been recovered. The box itself was kind of small so Trent didn't really know what to expect, but he opened it up anyway. He was a little sad to discover there wasn't much inside it but his mood picked up when he saw what it was. There was a safety deposit box and amazingly enough, one of Trent's leather jackets neatly folded up. Trent put the jacket on and revelled in the comforting feeling of the leather around his knees before he searched through the pockets of the coat and produced a key. He took the key and opened up the box, taking out the only things in it before putting the empty box in his jacket pocket.

“What was in there?” Jeff asked him. Trent was tempted to reply it was none of Jeff’s business, but the boy had been kind to him so far. He held up in one hand a seemingly large amount of credits, the universal currency of the world and several other planets, and in the other he held what appeared to be a locket. The design of the locket was a cross with a circle in the centre where the bars met. Jeff could make out a hinge on the circle which showed it could be opened up. He had no clue what was inside however.

“How did they survive the crash?” Jeff asked, curious as to how anything could survive that wreckage.

“Well, it was mostly the box” Trent replied, flipping it around in his hands and showing it to Jeff. “This baby can stand pretty much any amount of heat and force. I won it in a poker game actually. It's where I keep my most prized possessions”. He held up the money and locket again, to show what he meant.

“Money is one of your most valuable possessions?” Jeff asked. He sounded almost derogatory. Trent smirked and put the items in his pockets before answering.

“Not quite. Let's just say that this isn't the first time a ship has been destroyed on me. This money here is enough to buy me a new ship in an emergency, and allow me to go back out into the stars. Those are my most valued possessions” he said with a far off look in his eyes as he looked up at the ceiling.

“What about the locket?” Jeff asked. Trent looked back down, not quite meeting Jeff's eyes as his face darkened. Jeff thought he looked almost sad.

“That was given to me by someone who was once very close to me. I'll never forget her, and I'll never give this up either.” Trent replied, holding the locket tight in his hand. Jeff frowned, and looked at him apologetically.

“I'm sorry” Jeff said apologetically, looking down at the ground. Trent smiled and hit him playfully in the chest.

“No harm done kid. I just wish I had more clothes, can't exactly go out in these now can I?” he pointed down at his strange ensemble of a surgeon's gown with a leather jacket over it. Jeff laughed and remembered that there was a lost and found that might have something in it.

“I think I might know where to get you some clothes, just come with me and we'll see what we can do”. He walked towards the door and motioned for Trent to follow him.

“A'ight then”, Trent said, walking out the door and down the corridor with Jeff. As they were walking Jeff suddenly realised something.

“Say, just how did you survive that autopsy? And being stuck in that freezer. And that crash actually, I've seen the pictures, it was pretty brutal.” Jeff asked Trent as they walked down the corridor.

“Well what do you think happened? Isn't it obvious I just can't die?” Trent answered nonchalantly and not even breaking his stride. Jeff on the other hand stopped immediately as what Trent said made its way in to his brain.

Tuesday, 14 January 2014

The Return Of Immortal Space; Prologue

I decided to just go for it in the end. I'm making you all aware right now that I will NOT be publishing the full version of Immortal Space here. As well as discouraging sales, it actually goes against my publishing agreement. I'll be posting back up to where I was before I left, in the new and improved version, or until the document is finished. It'll pretty much be a case of what happens first. What's most likely to happen is that I'll end up getting back to where I was first.

I'm just posting the prologue for now and will save chapter one for next week actually. After that it should be an update on Tuesdays and Wednesdays. Supplying updates to you guys spreads the word and also keeps me in check as far as writing updates goes. Anyway, enjoy the rebirth of Immortal Space. You might not notice much different until later on, but I assure you this IS the edited version.
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Trent looked out of the window of his ship from his chair in the cockpit and thought to himself that no matter how many times he would see it, the Sun would always look good. The closer he got to it, the more impressive it looked. He also knew that his shields wouldn't last very long if he got much closer and that he should turn around and head back home, but he found the view irresistible. The way the flames of the Sun moved across its surface in a cosmic dance was a spectacular enough sight to keep him entranced.
After a few more minutes of watching he heard the sound of the ship’s alarms telling him his shields were almost dead, and he was left with no choice but to leave before he was blasted with the full heat of the Sun. That wouldn’t have ended well for him so he turned his ship around and set off for Earth. He turned on the autopilot so along the way he could still take time to take in all the sights of the universe around him. He never got tired of the endless boundaries of space; seeing stars burn their brightest, looking at the different planets he could see and wonder about the ones he couldn't see. He thought to himself that this was why he flew his ship at cruise speed. It made the journey longer, but it was perfect for getting a good look at everything. Some people were always in a hurry. Trent was not one of them.

He had just passed Venus when the sound of another alarm rang through his ship. This alarm told him that someone had locked on to his ship and fired a missile at it. He was able to act fast enough to dodge the first missile, but another came after him not long after the first one was evaded. He was not so lucky a second time and the missile struck his ship. His shields were down and there was too much damage for him to do evasive manoeuvres to try to get away from his attackers. He decided his best course of action would be to turn towards Earth and set his engines to full power. He knew that no matter what happened, it would be fine as long as he managed to land on Earth. He regretted going full speed as he would miss the sights but he reasoned to himself that when people are shooting at you, and you can't fight back, your best bet is to run. He knew he could always come back and see the sights later.

He saw Earth in the distance, and fired up the engines, managing to just avoid a missile that would have finished off his ship. He was too shaken up to do much else and the sudden increase in speed threw him off his seat. In his hurry to escape he had forgotten to strap himself in to his chair. He hit the wall hard and saw nothing but darkness before he passed out.


Doctor Osborne rushed to the scene of an accident that had happened in the city. He had heard that a spaceship had crash landed and he was part of the crew on their way to see the extent of the damage and if anyone could be saved. He didn't expect to find any survivors and wondered why they would even send a medical crew. The crash hadn't happened in a built up area so there wasn't likely to be any bystanders caught in the crash. There was still the tiny chance that someone might have survived and it was one his superiors were willing to take. He had ever seen anyone survive a crash like this himself, so he wasn't as willing to take the chance. That he could see the smoke from the crash before he arrived confirmed his suspicions. That was something no doctor heading to a crash site wanted to see if he hoped to find survivors.

When he arrived at the scene he saw that there wasn't much of the spaceship left. Most of it had burned up on re-entering the atmosphere, and what was left was crumpled from the crash. It had formed something akin to a large and jagged metal ball with holes in it. He saw a hand poking out from one of these holes and was able to check it for a pulse. He didn't find one, but he wasn't expecting to. A hand implied a body, and if there was an intact body he would need to take it back to the morgue at the hospital. He called over the rest of the paramedics and together they were able to cut into the wreckage. Osborne had gotten used to seeing gory scenes and they didn't faze him much anymore but one of the paramedics he was with was new, and the sight of the body inside made him retch and vomit. The body was held together enough for Doctor Osborne to make out it was a male body and, while he couldn't work out everything that had happened, he could tell by the body being out of a chair that the man had been blown out of his seat somehow. The head was almost completely caved in so whoever it was had hit it pretty hard on something;more than likely the wall. He thought that the body being broken and twisted into shapes no human could achieve was more than likely caused when the ship hit the Earth.

He called for a body bag and with a little effort and help from the paramedics he was able to get the body into it. He quickly searched through the man's pockets to see if he could find any form of identification. He found a Space Explorer's license that registered the man as able to fly a spacecraft and named the man as Trent Saxon. It informed Doctor Osborne the man was 30 years old and was originally from Earth.
“At least you got to come home one last time before you died” Osborne solemnly thought to himself as he looked down at the body of Trent Saxon.

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PS It also looks much cleaner in the document and will make one fine looking ebook. 

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